Socially Undead 3
Tuesday, August 5, 2025
In all honesty, this would have been better as a regular book. The world building is fantastic, but the pacing of the story as a choose your own adventure is extremely stilted. Things happen for no reason, your choices never quite feel grounded and are so same-y from scenario to scenario it seems pointless to have choices in the first place. The characters are the weakest part, with the pacing being so awkward meaning you don't get to know any of them well. I enjoyed the setting, not this story. Edited
S D 1
Thursday, July 31, 2025
Stll early in game but I really enjoyed what I read so far. It's a rich world with distinct characters and prose that narrates the story without being too difficult. Certainly more inspired than just the usual bland quasi European style fantasy or another Tolkien clone.
IAsked 0
Monday, August 4, 2025
380,000 word count Edited
Mark Angelo 1
Monday, August 4, 2025
Cool demo
Sxythe Khaen 2
Wednesday, August 6, 2025
Choices had little impact, characters did not feel fleshed out, relationships felt bad and didn't have a lot of content.
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