Tea Sipper
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Friday, February 27, 2026
I believe you guys have knocked it out of the park here. There are a few confusing moments, but overall, it's a great story. It's so much fun that I'll be trying out a new power pretty soon, I'm going to try for elemental. I do wish there was a little bit more nuance between reckless and composed, as some moments appear to blur the lines a bit. While I assume that is intended, I think a little more clarity around those areas would improve the overall experience.
Some One
1
Saturday, February 28, 2026
I liked it! I played different paths before deciding the no romance path was for me. A few things to improve on: Run through and fix some grammar, pronoun, and stat mistakes. I used cstg addon so its easier but choices, I think if you had one stat but hacked, should have passed but didnt. Others acted as if you failed. Certain choices I wanted to do were blocked behin requiring 1 stat failure & success. Fighting destroya 1v1, ultimate power. Maria should adopt Z. the personality checks r 2 hard Edited
Asa Longoria
1
Thursday, March 5, 2026
While many of these story games tend to be somewhat juvenile in nature and lacking in literary quality, this is an exception as in exceptional. 💯 It was a refreshing experience being able to equally enjoy the read, as well as the gameplay. Making something like this feel realistic is always a tough ask, but the author nailed it. If nothing else, takeaway this: the author can truly write. Where other authors in this genre depend on topic appeal or brainless fun, this one could sell books IRL