Lastkidd Sparkniss 0
Monday, October 27, 2025
This choice game needs to SERIOUSLY be proofread. There are repeating sentences and sometimes misused words. And I get it's supposed to be mysterious, but some of it makes absolutely no sense. Also the dialogue repeats in meaning on multiple occasions and wasn't even worth reading at critical moments in the story.
GenericAssUsername 0
Wednesday, October 15, 2025
The story is fine. More or less a standard haunted inherited house from an unknown benefactor sort of tale. It's very short, and surprisingly linear (alt paths are mostly flavor, not substance). They probably should stop charging by word count given how easy it is to fudge the numbers.
Aiden Haworth 0
Sunday, October 19, 2025
I've been an avid reader of these games for quite a long time, please continue making quality products like this one!!
Scott 0
Saturday, November 1, 2025
Requires pay for full story, should be upfront in details like the first thing before someone decides to download