Mike Fox
2
Tuesday, February 11, 2025
This is by far one of my favorite stories, the story is perfection. The fact that I was able to have a thrupple was fantastic. This needs to be expanded into a series because the only downside to this story is it ended too soon. I also think the story of Selma and Tanner needs to be expanded. Maybe a prequel to all the characters lives? Plus Yuri's story needs to be expanded as well as maybe give a polyamory option for all 4 to join together? I see so much for this story!
IAsked
1
Tuesday, March 4, 2025
90,000 words. After play I'm lowering the rating because the endings are just horrible and abruptly end. Do don't do anything of substance in this. Edited
Sherin
0
Friday, March 7, 2025
If you love Erotica...... With different permutations and combinations .. this is the one, it should have been part of Heart's Choice. Edited
Kat The Fool
2
Wednesday, June 11, 2025
It's....detailed, for sure. Very short, a quick slice of life. To be honest, it uh, sort of feels like, well....the author just REALLY wanted to write NSFW. To be fair, it's written very well! I just wish it was much longer and had a stronger story
Divine Paul
0
Thursday, March 13, 2025
it was awesome! the storyline is great, always kept me on the edge of my sit, and stirred my imagination. loved the point the different point of view i got almost didn't want it to finish ever. the author should do another just like this.❤️ 6stars even.
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